#Video feed back

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smoky hornet
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I was trolling in the first half btw I was gonna add way more and I’m not done editing but I wanna know what I should improve on and add to make it more watchable

mighty crag
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Why is king von the thumbnail is my first question.

smoky hornet
mighty crag
# smoky hornet Place holder

Gotcha.... So I watched five minutes of this video and here's a few things: The first minute is literally just a little montage while crazy story plays. I like the song like most von fans do but it doesn't exactly keep me on the video. In my personal opinion the video could've started with you explaining what was bothering you about the game since that's what the title leads you to believe the video is about. Now let's talk about your microphone audio. I'm not sure if you're going for the memey loud audio but the second I heard your audio peak I wanted to turn it off. Audio can be a bit of a struggle. I know because I still struggle with my microphone audio so I know it can kill a stream, video, short, etc. In my experience 9 times out of 10 people won't leave comments letting you know what turned them off they'll just click off. I've kinda adopted the faze jev cut commentary style of video. It might not be for you but I feel like you could've got everything you wanted to say across in a 8-10 minute video. Lastly, your title doesn't really do anything for me in terms of interest. Maybe something like "the ranked struggle is real | marvel rivals" or something like that. I suck at coming up with good titles myself but grabbing peoples attention with a decent title might bring more people in initially. Just my thoughts.