#Work shopping Title and Thumbnail

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potent lotus
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Howdy, just looking for some opinions on a Thumbnail/Title Combo.

My video is an unboxing style video set around the theme of the current Pokemon Card scarcity caused by Scalpers and the current release.

Currently working with this.

"Getting These Cards Was an Absolute Nightmare"

All opinions appreciated, ty💚

placid palm
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Hey there 😊
I like the concept, but I've the feeling there is a lot of string colors which makes the "sold out" pop a bit less.
Maybe you could try to slap the "sold out" on top of the Prismatic Evolutions logo like a sticker or a "rented" label you see sometimes if a house is rented out? Maybe with a red background/sticker (Do you know what I mean? 😅 ).

Also, your avatar takes a lot of attention from the eye (because it's a cool avatar). Maybe you could try to make it a bit smaller so there is more space for the things that are harder to recognize/read?

Aaand would maybe try around with this background of the empty shelf and a more neutral background. I'm just concerned that because the shelf is red, it's harder for the viewer to focus on the "Prismatic Evolutions" or "Sold Out" part 🤗

sour berry
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Yeah what simplysel said is right, there definitely could be better foreground and background separation
I'd suggest adding a drop shadow to the text and your character as well as blurring or darkening the background a bit

muted tendon
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Agreed with the above. Hard to make out everything here. Making the background darker will make the foreground more visible

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but looks good though!