Tear My Video Apart and Shower Me With Your Wonderful Constructive Criticism (Review My Video)

[low bough]

From title to thumbnail to overall video, please give me your INSIGHTS so I can improve my videos 🙂

Every review will be appreciated and thoroughly studied in order for me to become better. Thank you all so much in advance :>

This is the first episode of my minecraft hardcore series. I did some singing (and questionable dancing) on the minecraft song instrumentals. I also paid a lot of attention to editing my audio, since I have realized that subpar audio WILL be noticed.

Video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Znz2KgkRcGw&t=723s

Self Review: I put in a good 7 hours of editing this entire video. I experimented a lot with different scene changes, cuts, music, soundfx, and vfx. I added a quick trailer and skit in the intro, I think this made the video more me. (this was my first time doing a skit-like thing in the intro)

Questions: How can I improve my thumbnail? Does my title catch your attention and invoke your inner dopamine seekers? What do you think makes a marvelous title and thumbnail? How is my video in general? Were you bored in any parts? Was my trailer and skit in the intro effective in hooking you into the video?

P.S. My biggest inspiration is Coryxkenshin :>

[barren fern]

Not the type of videos I would watch, so I won't say much about the video itself but rather the T&T:

• You wrote "minecraft hardcore" on the thumbnail, but one can barely see it because your face blocks most of it. Also, the title already says "minecraft hardcore", so you don't have to repeat it. IMO you should either remove it from the title or from the thumbnail.
• Your head is ~ 50% of the thumbnail without adding too much. Maybe make it a bit smaller if it gives you space for aspects that would draw in more viewer.
• Your title promises that I won't regret watching the video, but I don't know why. So why should I click on it? It feels like one of those copy & paste titles that could be used for any videos. Try to make it a bit more fitting to the video or at least give it a T&T that make people curious to watch it. Your first video (w/ 233 views) was called "Minecraft Hardcore with a Twist" and the Thumbnail says "Kill 5 of each mob". If I see that, I know what's about and if I'm interested in this kind of challenge/twist, I will click on it to see how you do it. This is missing for the current video. 1. Why won't I regret it? Do you show something new, novel or a secret tip everyone should know?