#Anything I could improve? No sign of flatline yet, and the graph is gradually increasing.

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Title... What could've I done differently when looking at my second latest short and the latest one? The second latest one performed way better, and I am wondering why? Any feedback and/or critique is greatly appreciated.

Thanks

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Or is it just that I just need to wait it out since it only has been out less than 12 hours?