Did i improve my intro this time? What do you think of this video

[glossy smelt]

Since youre asking about your intro, I'll narrow my review to only dicuss your intro!!

Your hook? Was inexistant, but honestly its ok! The "Ok so" start was a bit weaker than a solid hook could have been, but it wasnt detracting. A solid middle ground Id argue. You could make a hook, but its ok right now as is!!

The intro-intro part (like the subatnce of your intro) was edited well, there werent any major issues outside of the flow and length. Your intro was 1 minute 30 ish seconds long! Wayyy too long!! You make up for it with amazing editing, and it isnt so bad that it could turn a viewer away, but ti gets a bit boring, and that risks triggering the "pls just start the video!" thoughts in the viewer

For this, maybe cut your intros into two clear sections (like two seperate paragraphs)and treat them as clearly seperate with the audio fade effect you used in this video (that way the viewer cna clearly tell theres a transition happening)

First intro: outlines the core of the video but does NOT outline what this video will exactly cover subtopic wise. for this video, that would be the "You know how personas game devs are greedy and caused expectations and made cash grabs" etc section. Cut it off after this part. You could continue for longer if you want but only briefly mention how these games sometimes actually are good. Cut it off before giving details. Then have the uaido fade/transtion and move on to the second bit

Second "intro": Technically no longer an intro, but here you can have a whole section discribing how "hey these cash grabes are actually low key kinda good sometimes??!! I know right??" in more detial. This could be listing some specific games youre about to discuss or going into how fans actually really love those terrible terrible cash grabs. This section can be as long ro as short as it needs to be, buit its more of a section of your vidoe and less an intro, so you cna go into specific details if you want!