#YO IF ANYONE HAS TIME TO REACT TO 2 VIDS THAT TOGETHER ARE 15 MIN LONG PLS DM ME, YOU WONT REGRET IT

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daring cradle
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if you could dm me after it would be much appreaciated

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@rapid matrix

uncut kernel
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#1 your facecam is massive, shrink that down more

daring cradle
uncut kernel
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editing is basic but catchy, audio is good so i dont really have any more complaints

daring cradle
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what about

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the actual content

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and wdym basic but catchy

uncut kernel
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what i mean by basic but catchy is the editing is entertaining and will keep people watching, your content is good

daring cradle
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and Did u feel bored at any point

uncut kernel
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others might though not sure

daring cradle
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okay okay

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ALSO if u know anyone who could also give advice

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please tag them here

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@uncut kernel ?

uncut kernel
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i dont have anyone else, you can maybe get ben in here to help out

daring cradle
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idk who he is so if you tagged him it would be great!

uncut kernel
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theres a shit ton of bens lmao

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idk which one

daring cradle
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LMAO BRU

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U KNOW HUM THO

uncut kernel
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nah he just helps in some threads and gen

daring cradle
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ohh okay

daring cradle
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  1. Does this feel of decent/good quality to you, do you see growth to a full-time career gaining thousands or even millions of views/subs

  2. Hows the editing, is it clean, is it good enough, what can be improved

  3. Does this honestly have potential

  4. Do you feel people are interested in the first 30 sec to a minute (hows the hook)

  5. do you get bored, or do you feel there are sections that can be boring for the audience in my niche

  6. How would you promote this to get more viewers in the niche

  7. There alot of startup channels each day, does my stand out from others, yes or no, and why

  8. How often should i upload for growth

  9. Ronaldo or messi

  10. Any other advice you would like to share, or I should know?

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@civic axle

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pls tag me or dm when done

rapid matrix
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Explanation:

I approach reviews step by step, focusing on levels. If I notice enough critical issues in your video, I’ll pause the review and provide guidance on how to address those key areas. This way, you can concentrate on improving a few things at a time rather than feeling overwhelmed with too much feedback at once. Some aspects of video creation are foundational and should be solid before moving on to more advanced improvements. These aspects are level 1, then less foundational are 2, and so forth!

Here's my grading system:

✅ : You're good here, or good for your niche's expectations! We'll keep going with the review!

🟦 : You're ok here (or it's only a small matter). I could pause the review if enough of these pop up.

❌ : You're weaker in this, but we can work on it! Get more than 2 overall and we'll stop to focus on them!

⚠️ : Critical issue here! We'll pause the review and focus here!

⚪ : This is not applicable to the video or your channel! No effect! Lets keep going!

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⋆｡ﾟ☁︎｡⋆｡ ﾟ☾ ﾟ｡⋆ LEVEL 1 ⋆｡ﾟ☁︎｡⋆｡ ﾟ☾ ﾟ｡⋆

⋆ Video Clarity ⋆
✅ 1080 HD + (High-definition video for sharp details)
❌ Lighting (Proper lighting for clarity and consistency.)
🟦 Visual Composition (A balanced arrangement of elements within the frame.)
❌ Crisp Video (Sharp and clear video with no blurriness.)

⋆ Audio Clarity ⋆
❌ Crisp Audio (Clear and sharp sound with no distortion.)
❌ Sound Levels (Properly balanced audio, ensuring consistent volume without being too loud or too soft.)
✅ Background noise (Minimization of unwanted ambient sounds that could distract from the main audio.)
🟦 Music / SFX LevelsIs any added sounds balanced and not over taking?

⋆ Video Structure ⋆
✅ Skeleton Structure (The basic framework of a video is there.)
✅ Cohesiveness (The different parts of the video connect and flow.)
✅ Clear Narrative (The logical flow and development of the story or message from start to finish.)
✅ Pacing (The content doesn’t drag or feel rushed.)

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⋆｡ﾟ☁︎｡⋆｡ ﾟ☾ ﾟ｡⋆ LEVEL 2 ⋆｡ﾟ☁︎｡⋆｡ ﾟ☾ ﾟ｡⋆

⋆ Editing Clarity ⋆
🟦 Consistant Edits (Smooth and seamless edits that maintain continuity throughout the video.)
🟦 Consistant Style (A cohesive visual and narrative style that is maintained consistently throughout the content.)
🟦 Transitions (A smooth movement between scenes that doesn't lose viewer engagement.)
✅ Pacing / Flow (The rhythm and timing of the video that keeps it engaging without feeling rushed or dragging.)
✅ Use of Effects / Graphics (The use of effects or graphics that enhance the video without distracting.)
🟦 Camera Work (The skillful use of camera angles, movements, and framing to enhance storytelling and clarity.)

⋆ Topic Relevence ⋆
⚠️ Topic (Interesting and aligned with the target audience’s interests.)
✅ Unique Selling Point (Reflects the channel’s niche and stands out from similar content.)
⚪ Title Value (Short, relevant, and sparks curiosity.)

⋆ Video Skeleton ⋆
✅ The Hook (Starts with an attention-grabbing moment to pull viewers in.)
✅ The Intro (Introduction that sets expectations and establishes the video’s purpose.)
🟦 The Clingy Minute (The first minute keeps viewers interested with key details or excitement.)
❌ The Substance/Body (Main content that delivers on the promise made in the title and intro.)
🟦 The Outro (Closing that wraps up the video and encourages further engagement.)

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I think this si a good enough place to stop to focus on some areas to work on!

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For starters:

  • Camera/lighting/mic quaility (in general camera stuff can usually be passed up for a long time but if you want to do full cam shots, def work on these! Mic upgrades usually are best done first but I thini your mic issues were mostly because they werent leveling evenly and were sometimes way to quiet)
  • doubling down on lighitng: get a TON of lighting. Your camera will be slightly better quaility at more lighting (jsut avoid over exposure)
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A few mor slightly minor thigns:

  • frequent swaps back and forth between editing and video styles cna confuse or jar the viewer. It sok if you do it and those "two edit styles/two formats" are your thing, but keep in mind it can be a lot for a new viewer)
  • Your camera work (swapping back and forth for transitions, going from mini-cam to full cam, etc) seems off. This could be a quality issue. I usually recommend recoridng cameras seperate, but Im nto sure if this was a stream or not originally
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Bigger issues:

  • your content, it was really on the border here of playing with TOS concepts. I get it, you find humour in it, but others dont and you could have some serious issues down the line with this. I'd highly recommend steering carfuly, because while I know this was all in humour, it didnt vibe as pardoy and a YT report could think otherwise if this is a normal channel vibe you have, not to mentoin the type of community you ght start developing could be a future regret when you try moneitzing down the line. Id be really careful with the racist/pdf-file/adult jokes
daring cradle
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imm read rm

rapid matrix
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@daring cradle I reviewed the first video

daring cradle
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okay okay

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btw

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@rapid matrix the title for the first video is

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DRESS TO IMPRESS but the themes are INNAPRORIATE

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or

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Buying the MOST INNAPRORIIATE DRESS TO IMPRESS THEMES...

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one of those 2

daring cradle
rapid matrix
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And honestly "inappropriate" isnt a good vibe

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Maybe "sus"

daring cradle
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also ye my audio is so ass bro i got a fan

daring cradle
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THATS ACT SO MUCH BETTER

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yes yes i appreciate it yeah sus is so much better

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its more trendy too yk

rapid matrix
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Anytime!

daring cradle
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KEEP IN MIND WHEN GRADING THE SECOND VIDEO

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ITS NOT FINISHED

rapid matrix
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Please be careful though! This is high key liekly to be on YTs radar

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Im not grading both lol

daring cradle
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so like dont like give me marks if the end is js random

daring cradle
rapid matrix
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Ill grade it when its done, just make another post!

daring cradle
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alrrrr

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can i ask u tho

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was the video entertaining at all

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and do u see potential to grow a big channel

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and how can i improve the clingy minute and the main content thta was supposed to be delivered

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i thought i delivered it but if i didnt please let me know so i can do better

rapid matrix
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Sure

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Was the video entertaining?: I could see some peole finding it entertaining

Potential for a big channel?: Oh no, not likely. You could get fans, but Yt isnt all about this sort of content, especially when you dont have a YT-advisor yet (you get one when you get bigger, one is assigned to you by YT) to make sure your videos are YT approved. Yt reallllly doesnt like racism, pdf-file, and adult jokes all mashed up in a video. Even larger channels that do this sort of stuff do it rarely or with an advisor approving everything

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Youre sooooo risky here

wild oasis
rapid matrix
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Thats why it got a warning mark, this stuff can risk your whole channel, so Id avoid it till youre bigger and work on other video topics

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Ben is amazing

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Love ben, his advice is gold

daring cradle
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KSI or i showspeed

rapid matrix
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Large channels

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With advisors

daring cradle
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their whole content is like similar

daring cradle
rapid matrix
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Similar, but they get it all approved

daring cradle
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yes, but like

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they got their channels big thru this "dark humor"

wild oasis
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They know exactly which lines to toe and not toe

daring cradle
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so like how come they got thru and i cant is kind of my question

wild oasis
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Notice the lack of 9/11 jokes? They know what they can and can't get away with

daring cradle
wild oasis
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Common sense mostly to be honest with you

rapid matrix
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They got big by not surpassing YTs wants

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and Ksi got an advisor, just not from YT first

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He paid for one

daring cradle
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okay so wait

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if I dont surpass what youtube wants

wild oasis
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Also KSI's main blow up was his music

daring cradle
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do you see potential in this channel growing big

wild oasis
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And then the reddit reactions during that trend's peak

daring cradle
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he grew popular thru dark humor fifa vids in 2010

wild oasis
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Popular =/= blow up

rapid matrix
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He was ok, but his call to fame was music

daring cradle
rapid matrix
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Theres people here who blow up and DONT become famous, and vice bersa

wild oasis
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Then the reddit "second channel" which surpassed the first

daring cradle
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okay i understand u now

rapid matrix
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Theyre very different

daring cradle
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okay okay

rapid matrix
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Yeah its ok!

daring cradle
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@rapid matrix if i dont cross YT's lines

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but still keep like a little dark humor

rapid matrix
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You can have dark humour

daring cradle
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is there potential of my content blowing up

rapid matrix
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But theres a line

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I play gorey horror games

daring cradle
rapid matrix
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I dont pass the line

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You can

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but you have to read the TOS and be sooo careful

daring cradle
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is there potential is what im asking

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ion wanan be working for nothing yk

rapid matrix
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dark humour =/= "black jokes"

daring cradle
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im lost

rapid matrix
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Black jokes? Joke sthat are super twisted and messed up

wild oasis
daring cradle
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ohh okay

wild oasis
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But I personally would refuse to click either of those videos

daring cradle
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yeah i get it

rapid matrix
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like joking about how my serial killer in a game im playing must love toast or giggling during a chase scene is dark humour (taking a bad situaiton and finding the funny part to laugh at)

daring cradle
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but theres def a massive audience/niche for my content

rapid matrix
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Black humour is more like mocking a serious situation

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On the line and before it, yes

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after? Not on YT (youll lose your channel)

daring cradle
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okay so basically keep dark humor

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watch out

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and i can blow up my channel without facing consequences

rapid matrix
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yes, just be careful and pick topics carefully

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and def follow the tos

daring cradle
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also wait u didnt help me in one spot

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The Substance/Body (Main content that delivers on the promise made in the title and intro.), how did i not deliver the promise of my video

daring cradle
rapid matrix
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Too many crossing the line jokes/topics. It went from "sus" to concerning often

daring cradle
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really?

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i mean i still delievered what i said i was gonna do

rapid matrix
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your substance was lacking, the body that you promised was there, and it was lacking

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Too many crossing the line jokes/topics. It went from "sus" to concerning often

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That really can turn away viewers

daring cradle
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what is substance

daring cradle
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@rapid matrix LAST THING HOW CAN I SEE UR VIDEO ON THE REVIEW

wild oasis
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Huh?

daring cradle
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she said shes like posting vids

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on reviews

wild oasis
# daring cradle what is substance

Think about it like a sandwich

The top bread is the intro, the meat/lettuce/whatever is the substance, the sauces are the extra bits of effort you put in, and the bottom bread is how to conclude

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Your sandwich needs more meat

daring cradle
wild oasis
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By recording more substance

daring cradle
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????

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pls simpilr terms 😭

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be more direct

wild oasis
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I am

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The most "stupid simple" version of this explanation would be for a "top 10" video that only has 7 items

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If it's a top 10 then we expect 10

daring cradle
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okay okay but like

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give me an example like

wild oasis
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If your video is about "sus moments" in a game, then show more sus moments

daring cradle
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from my video

daring cradle
wild oasis
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I refuse to watch it tbh

daring cradle
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lmaooo why

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ill js wait for her to get online

wild oasis
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Packaging + Luna already covered a lot of things really well

daring cradle
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okay okay

rapid matrix
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Hopefully that clears it up! I don’t make video reviews

daring cradle
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ohhh okay okay

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WAIT @rapid matrix

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PLS EXPLAIN THE SUBSTANCE STUFF

rapid matrix
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Ben did it perfectly

daring cradle
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NO BUT LIKE

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GIVE ME EXACTLY

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MORE SUBSTANCE

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LIKE USING MY VIEO

rapid matrix
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You need more meat, aka, you need more value in your video

daring cradle
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yes and give me example

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via my video

rapid matrix
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You wouldn’t want to have a sandwich full of nothing right? Just bread?

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Well, shock value moments from your clips is the only substance you have

daring cradle
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Bro these metaphors dont make sense yall 😭

rapid matrix
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There’s no personality expression or connection with the audience

daring cradle
wild oasis
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But it does

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The video itself

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The reason someone clicked

daring cradle
wild oasis
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Everything that isn't the beginning or end

rapid matrix
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A lot of shock value, which most people don’t usually come for a lone

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You need to work on your personality. Give people a reason to pick you over any other video.

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For me, it’s mostly my personality

daring cradle
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wait so like

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wait but how do i bring more personality

rapid matrix
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For a theory channel is probably an in-depth analysis that’s new and unique

daring cradle
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outside of just talking

rapid matrix
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See now thats the fun part

wild oasis
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Talking =/= showing personality

rapid matrix
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You have to express and make that personality very clear

daring cradle
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i said outside of talking

wild oasis
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I can play games all day and go "oh look a duck" and that is nothing

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Make jokes, do it with the editing too

daring cradle
rapid matrix
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Tell us what you think how you feel your thoughts on things go in depth and explore what being in this game or doing these things means to you

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Who do you watch on YT

daring cradle
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okay so js say whts on my mind more?

daring cradle
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ksi

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speed

wild oasis
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Give the video a goal, work towards it

daring cradle
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occasionally

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sambucha

rapid matrix
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Ok tell me what their personality’s are

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Tell me, why would you click on one of their videos or seek them out to watch one of their videos?

daring cradle
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theyre entertaining

wild oasis
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JJ is pretty hype and loud

rapid matrix
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What Ben is saying is the personality aspect

wild oasis
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Chunkz has that "father bear" vibe will bouncing off JJ real well

daring cradle
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yes i get it

rapid matrix
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And for most con Creator is especially in the gaming industry. I think personality is very, very important.

daring cradle
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aj is like tht little guy whos always tryna cheat for his own good

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i getchu

rapid matrix
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Entertainment by itself can make for a great gimmick video or shorthand video and sometimes some creators can really lean into it, but they also have a personality to back it

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Yesss

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Now what’s your personality?

daring cradle
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how do i find

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my own personality

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THATS THE PROBLEM like

rapid matrix
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You really should know it

daring cradle
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i feel like

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im a mix

rapid matrix
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Ben, what’s your personality

daring cradle
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likeee

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damn this is hard

rapid matrix
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You can be a mix, mixes work, we’re all usually very very mixed

daring cradle
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I do believe i hve a personality

rapid matrix
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See if you don’t know who you are it’s very hard to come across as who you are and express that to someone else

daring cradle
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i feel im very unique compared to others

rapid matrix
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And hey, that’s absolutely OK

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We are all unique in that sense

daring cradle
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yesss

rapid matrix
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But being able to describe some Keynote of your personality is really important

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If you ask YouTuber, what her personality is in the sense of their content creation, they could tell you

daring cradle
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id say im loud, funny, and like n

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an instant

wild oasis
daring cradle
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sayer

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@wild oasis

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BEN

rapid matrix
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Pffffttt

daring cradle
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MY PERSONALITY

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IS LIKE HARRY

rapid matrix
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I’m sorry, man. I know you hate this question

daring cradle
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HOW TF DO U DESCRIBE THAT

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hes lit js like me

wild oasis
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Okay

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Then be that person

daring cradle
rapid matrix
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Loud, funny can be a great start

daring cradle
wild oasis
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If you're 100% like Harry, why don't I see that in your video?

daring cradle
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im not tryna js copy people

wild oasis
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Well yeah but if you're naturally like someone that's fine

daring cradle
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idk*

wild oasis
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But if you say you're like Harry, and I see your video and disagree, then you're clearly not showing that side of yourself

daring cradle
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i meannn u didnt watch the video 😡

rapid matrix
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To be honest, I never really lean into loud and funny as core personality traits (it reminds me of being a little kid being asked why you like someone “because they’re funny and nice”)

wild oasis
rapid matrix
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Oh bens on point hete

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He’s not saying that he did see the video and disagrees

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He’s saying there is a solid chance your viewer will see the video and disagree

daring cradle
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okay

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@rapid matrix when u saw that video

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what did my personality come up as

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or u dont know since i didnt give u enough

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of my personality

wild oasis
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Passionate?

rapid matrix
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Def accurate

daring cradle
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btw @rapid matrix can u link ur channel too

wild oasis
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Why

daring cradle
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so i have influencce to work on?

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cus shes duh following all her steps

rapid matrix
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I didn’t notice a notable or memorable personality

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Oh, I don’t have a YouTube channel like that

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I have a TikTok channel and a twitch and two channels that I’m working on

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None of which are good for taking pointers but I appreciate your kind words!

daring cradle
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its all goodd

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okay okay but also

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how can i bring out my pesronaloty to where

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its enough that its not overwhelming or making the video boring

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but at the same time the person watching can get an idea of who i am

rapid matrix
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Trust me, overwhelming is not your problem in the expression sense

daring cradle
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LMAOOOO

rapid matrix
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You are a bit too much with your humor because it’s on the border, but it’s not overwhelming

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People like me can be overwhelming and have to be careful that it is absolutely something you have to be careful of that sort of personality

wild oasis
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Remember that on camera everything you do gets dulled by a large margin

rapid matrix
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Oh yeah, definitely that too

daring cradle
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what does that mean

wild oasis
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I could feel like I'm screaming at the camera

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Then on the video it's like "oh he got a little loud there I guess"

rapid matrix
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Absolutely this

daring cradle
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ohhh i getchu ye

rapid matrix
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Your camera and microphone don’t pick you up as much as you actually are IRL so you do have to be a little bigger to get things across

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Like speaking far away from everyone else across the room

daring cradle
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okay okay

rapid matrix
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You get bigger so they can see you and understand you

daring cradle
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i undderstand

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so ur saying for me to add substanace to make my videos more entertaining is for me to js give off personality and just by engaging myself more in the video

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being more vocal or putting me doing smth more in the video

wild oasis
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That's one thing yeah

daring cradle
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alr basiclaly focus more on myself i get it

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engaging more

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i create more content rather than hving others do it for me

wild oasis
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Well yeah

daring cradle
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i get ittt bet bet

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well okay i appreciate it

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now im js waiting on mazelee to also gimme a review on this

civic axle
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This dialogue with @wild oasis and @rapid matrix was all very generous stuff👍

daring cradle
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and they helped me with like what line I should cross and what I shouldn’t

civic axle
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Okay, so i watched to about 2:30 before clicking off. It was rough tbh.

daring cradle
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Too much excessive edgyness?

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I realized I gotta chill on that

wild oasis
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and more

daring cradle
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I mean yeah

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But the edgyness is the biggest problem

civic axle
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The vibe, pacing, sound, memes, and sound bytes do seem to fit the current mainstream editing style, so i think the editing was fine

daring cradle
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Cus that can stop me from getting monitized or getting pushed to new viewers

civic axle
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The topic and taboo nature of the video WILL break tos eventually, or someone will report it. Someone without thicker skin will feel some type of way. I think there were too many triggers.

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I’ve seen things a lot less excessive get taken down

daring cradle
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Okay okay

civic axle
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There were moments of giggles, but not really strong memorable punchlines imo. I get what you were aiming for, but i think you just need to get more screentime/practice

daring cradle
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LICKILY for me I have a list of ideas and only a couple of them were really dark humor related so imma scrap those 🙏

civic axle
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Camera quality… okay. Not a biggie. You gotta get a better backdrop though. Clean up a bit. Put up a plant. A poster. Make your environment a bit more lived in.

wild oasis
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Cleaning up for video feels a little weird at first but 100% do it

civic axle
wild oasis
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I shaved in preparation of recording today lol

daring cradle
daring cradle
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How bout the actual pace or like quality or growth

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Here’s the questions I made if you didn’t see

civic axle
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Pace is really good. Very dynamic editing.

daring cradle
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  1. Does this feel of decent/good quality to you, do you see growth to a full-time career gaining thousands or even millions of views/subs

  2. Hows the editing, is it clean, is it good enough, what can be improved

  3. Does this honestly have potential

  4. Do you feel people are interested in the first 30 sec to a minute (hows the hook)

  5. do you get bored, or do you feel there are sections that can be boring for the audience in my niche

  6. How would you promote this to get more viewers in the niche

  7. There alot of startup channels each day, does my stand out from others, yes or no, and why

  8. How often should i upload for growth

  9. Ronaldo or messi

  10. Any other advice you would like to share, or I should know?

daring cradle
wild oasis
daring cradle
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My bad if I scarred u btw @civic axle 😭😭😭😭

civic axle
# daring cradle 1. Does this feel of decent/good quality to you, do you see growth to a full-tim...
  1. Good quality as a starting creator. You will need more seat time to really hone into your craft, but i cant really say if i can see the content in the millions of views since the editing style is very similar in this era. I would have to see something more on trending topics to connect better with a potential vertical. 2. Editing was quite good. Some moments were a bit quick, but it was still tastefully done. 3. No it doesnt have potential. Change topics, avoid some taboo things as mentioned and we can see then. 4. Stylistically it was okay. Content and hook was weak. 5. Hard to say. I wasn’t bored, but i was ready to click out at around 1:50. 6. Maybe a quick cut segment on shorts? Not sure. Would have to see more of what you put out. 7. Tbh, no… but i don’t think this is a good video to gauge you by. 8. I would aim for 1 video a week for now, with strong emphasis on analysis, research, title/thumbnail design, channel branding. 9. Messi. 10. Your assertiveness to really figure yourself out with humility and openness is what will take you to the next season of your creator journey. I felt like this was pretty harsh and brutal, but with some more social awareness and content research, you’ll make strides in progressing.
wild oasis
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Big respect points to Mazelee, I agree with his points

daring cradle
rapid matrix
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Mazelee, on point as always

wild oasis
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oments

daring cradle
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I did the therapist one which isn’t quite deep into dark humor but it still has a lot of elements

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(The unfinished one)

rapid matrix
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Id like to see you make another video, start from scratch or with our comments and advice and see what you create

civic axle
rapid matrix
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I think itll be much better and much easier to notice any other issues you might have

civic axle
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You seem to have the energy and editing style, so if you just grabbed the right topic, i think you would nail it

daring cradle
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My next video would prob be either, going on Roblox smash to pash and using a voice changer or getting a job in Roblox

wild oasis
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As a wise man once said:

You're not as funny as you think you are. You're not as entertaining as you think you are. If the part you're keeping isn't absolutely wildly entertaining, it's probably boring. Be absolutely ruthless. 2 minutes of great is better than 30 minutes of mostly okay.

daring cradle
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Ion mind getting shit on as long as I can really improve SO I APPRECIATE YALL BEING HONESTTT

civic axle
daring cradle
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thx thx

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Well thx for ur guys time everyone!

civic axle
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You have a LOT of the integral pieces in terms of editing and the persona. The backend (topic research, analysis, title/thimbnail/branding) is what is very weak though.

daring cradle
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Wait

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Whats anylsis

civic axle
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A deep self reflective look at what your video encapsulates, means, represents, who it’s for, why you make it…beyond numbers and money

daring cradle
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Ohhh okay

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I getchu

civic axle
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I honestly think you would be pretty great at political commentary, movie review/commentary, stuff like that as well. Maybe when you get older😆

daring cradle
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Maybe you never know 😭

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But hopefully with my newer vids I’m less taboo and they pop off and I’m act full time on this

wild oasis
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Everything takes time

daring cradle
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Ye I know

civic axle
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You seem to have more of a drive than most, so that obsessiveness give you an advantage.👍

daring cradle
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yeah I really want it badly

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I think of it everyday I JS

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I gotta try yk

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Ion wanna be working a normal job or stuck in college

civic axle
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Good for you. You have the heart of a boss. That can never be underestimated.

daring cradle
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Hopefully I manifest this snd my hard work pays off 😭🙏

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I’m tryna hit 100k by July maybe that’s too out of reach but it gives me motivation to work hard

wild oasis
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Ambitious but not unseen, you got a lot of work to do

daring cradle
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Yeah ik

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Ion got time for breaks or nth

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I’m JS putting my all working everyday