#Feedback request

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eager zenith
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I have posted a new video, please watch and share your feedback and suggestions

https://youtu.be/HHd8Ix0CLtU?si=-O0Snx7G2qwEUVL8

👌Authentic Purple Modak with Natural Colors | No Artificial Dyes!🍽️

Ingredients:

For the dough:
Rice flour - 250 gram
Salt - 1tsp

For Fillings:
Yellow Gram - 150 gram
Brown sugar - 10 Tablespoon

👍Follow my channel for more videos: https://youtube.com/@KitchenFoodBites?si=vt3bkaMiaCZQBCQh

#asmrcooking #QuickRecipes #Recipe_hub #viral #viralf...

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unborn umbra
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Explanation:

I approach reviews step by step, focusing on levels. If I notice enough critical issues in your video, I’ll pause the review and provide guidance on how to address those key areas. This way, you can concentrate on improving a few things at a time rather than feeling overwhelmed with too much feedback at once. Some aspects of video creation are foundational and should be solid before moving on to more advanced improvements. These aspects are level 1, then less foundational are 2, and so forth!

Here's my grading system:

✅ : You're good here, or good for your niche's expectations! We'll keep going with the review!

🟦 : You're ok here (or it's only a small matter). I could pause the review if enough of these pop up.

❌ : You're weaker in this, but we can work on it! Get more than 2 overall and we'll stop to focus on them!

⚠️ : Critical issue here! We'll pause the review and focus here!

⚪ : This is not applicable to the video or your channel! No effect! Lets keep going!

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⋆。゚☁︎。⋆。 ゚☾ ゚。⋆ LEVEL 1 ⋆。゚☁︎。⋆。 ゚☾ ゚。⋆

Video Clarity
✅ 1080 HD + (High-definition video for sharp details)
🟦 Lighting (Proper lighting for clarity and consistency.)
✅ Visual Composition (A balanced arrangement of elements within the frame.)
✅ Crisp Video (Sharp and clear video with no blurriness.)

Audio Clarity
✅ Crisp Audio (Clear and sharp sound with no distortion.)
🟦 Sound Levels (Properly balanced audio, ensuring consistent volume without being too loud or too soft.)
✅ Background noise (Minimization of unwanted ambient sounds that could distract from the main audio.)
⚪ Music / SFX LevelsIs any added sounds balanced and not over taking?

Video Structure
🟦 Skeleton Structure (The basic framework of a video is there.)
🟦 Cohesiveness (The different parts of the video connect and flow.)
⚪ Clear Narrative (The logical flow and development of the story or message from start to finish.)
❌ Pacing (The content doesn’t drag or feel rushed.)

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⋆。゚☁︎。⋆。 ゚☾ ゚。⋆ LEVEL 2 ⋆。゚☁︎。⋆。 ゚☾ ゚。⋆

Editing Clarity
✅ Consistent Edits (Smooth and seamless edits that maintain continuity throughout the video.)
✅ Consistent Style (A cohesive visual and narrative style that is maintained consistently throughout the content.)
⚪ Transitions (A smooth movement between scenes that doesn't lose viewer engagement.)
❌ Pacing / Flow (The rhythm and timing of the video that keeps it engaging without feeling rushed or dragging.)
⚪ Use of Effects / Graphics (The use of effects or graphics that enhance the video without distracting.)
✅ Camera Work (The skillful use of camera angles, movements, and framing to enhance storytelling and clarity.)

Topic Relevance
✅ Topic (Interesting and aligned with the target audience’s interests.)
✅ Unique Selling Point (Reflects the channel’s niche and stands out from similar content.)
✅ Title Value (Short, relevant, and sparks curiosity.)

Video Skeleton
⚪ The Hook (Starts with an attention-grabbing moment to pull viewers in.)
🟦 The Intro (Introduction that sets expectations and establishes the video’s purpose.)
❌ The Clingy Minute (The first minute keeps viewers interested with key details or excitement.)
🟦 The Substance/Body (Main content that delivers on the promise made in the title and intro.)
✅ The Outro (Closing that wraps up the video and encourages further engagement.)

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Hey! Amazing video! It reminds me a bit of ninos home! I love asmr cooking videos so im so happy to review this!

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I feel your pacing is a tad off, and at times it can be jarring

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This is why you got xs, but thats ok! At times youre really slow, very rhymical

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Then suddenly the beat, pace, or tempo suddenly jumps ahead.

Like you start with shopping cabbage at a set pace

Slow chop
Slow chop
Slow chop
Slow chop
silence
Slides bowl
Pour, pour pour

etc, they have a rate to them.

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Now is this a nitpic? oh yeah! def 100%! It was something that stoof out to me