#Doing a 3rd Content Critique Stream

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slow coral
slow coral
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If you prefer, you can also post here and I'll give you a review!

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Doing a 3rd Content Critique Stream

fresh sun
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I’ve got two videos if that’s okay!

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Iceberg is nearly 3 hours but you can skim or skip if it’s too much lol. Looking for any and all feedback and always looking for ways to improve!

junior basin
# slow coral If you prefer, you can also post here and I'll give you a review!

This is awesome, I'll post here since I don't have a branded reddit account setup yet. Here is my video posted 12 hours ago. I'd love some feedback and critique on it. I'll definitely watch the stream too regardless (but under a different name)

Main feedback I'm looking for is what I did good and therefore what I should do more. What was done poorly and should be cut down/out. And how I can improve my intro/hook 😁

https://youtu.be/CGzACfjORM4

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