#Roast my title: "I created a video game but only you can set its fate"

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fiery skiff
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As my title says, I'm a game developer who must attract players from Youtube.
I've been doing around 20 shorts, it's good but I feel it's the right time to make a video with a potential to reach thousands of people.
I follow this rules when making a title (gathered from Mr Beast / Paddy Galloway and other top creators):

  • Broad - can appeal to a large audience
  • Curiosity Trigger
  • Unique and fresh
  • Benefit driven for the viewer
  • Expectation of a payoff
  • Notion of risk or danger

The video will tell the story of the creation of the game, the sections does not have to be equal in length, I believe that 1 to 4 would be less than a minute.

My childhood revelation that making games is my lifegoal

A decade long self teaching on software development and my professional successes as a dev

Switching from webdev: the cold difficulty of gamedev

Crafting the most powerful base building system ever

Making a Voxel Planet that you can terraform from core to upper atmosphere

Generating biomes in real-time on the planet

I'm not sure about the structure, maybe it could be more interesting, more payoff oriented, more dramatic, etc...
Thanks

shrewd wave
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Im sorry but... what exactly are you asking for feedback on? My brain is fried and I might need help seeing where your exact question/issue is?