Is this a good idea?

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I have been working on this video, could you please tell me if this is a good idea? https://youtu.be/JPjfaQ3Mzr0?si=2PfpWHhE1OM6qG31

[quaint carbon]

what is the video supposed to be about?

[wise karma]

So ideally you have 30seconds to grab your potential viewers attention. I think the robot voice in begining that says "so you think your salad is just greens" is a bit off putting for me personally. I think jumping in immediately with your part about "beneth those crisp leaves" would probably lead to better retention.

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Thank you so much

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Studying lettuce under the microscope to learn about leave structure, I know most YouTubers would talk straight to the camera and say: today we’re gonna learn about leave structure under the microscope, but I wanna do it more movie style

[quaint carbon]

ah yeah got it, its a unique style that I was drawn but as said before once you post look at Retention graphs to see if you need to change anything but seems like a great concept

[wise karma]

See thats very interesting and if done right will be a hit.

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Will do, I appreciate your feedback, I don’t know if you can tag people when asking for feedback, but if you can, please feel free to tag me and I will definitely be there for ya