My First Drama Commentary but I'm afraid it's too short or the editing is really bad

[nova wing]

Hey, everyone so this is the first video I've ever posted on a fresh channel that isn't gaming related and I really enjoyed making it, but I think that the length of the video is too short and that the editing isn't great (as it's my first time properly editing a video) I used OpenShot for the editing as it was one of the free editing software's I could find.
https://youtu.be/fw2kpdki4Sg?si=uViYu9Ltb6BceNJ0
So any feedback on how I could extend the length of the video (without making it seem like its dragging) or how to get better at editing would be greatly appreciated!

[vapid nest]

Honestly the only issue is the audio, your voice is too quiet had to use my volume boosting extension. also the beeping for rape should be cut so it just blocks the word, as you can still hear you say it which is a trigger word for youtube and algorithm wont like that

[nova wing]

thanks very much I'm thinking of swapping to Davinchi Resolve but I've heard it's difficult for beginners, I'll also make sure to speak a bit louder next time aha

[vapid nest]

Davinci is what I personally use, and its not super difficult especially for audio tweaks. Also has a lot of free transitions that would add some spice. I'd say just messing around with it for a solid hour lets you figure it out pretty well.