Critique on new Short

[hidden obsidian]

Looking for feedback on content, format and length.

https://www.youtube.com/shorts/KkASa8hmRe0

Looking for feedback on format, content, length and thumbnail.

[hidden obsidian]

That makes sense, thank you.

[hidden obsidian]

Went for that approach here: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/rnXKiGMRGpM

[hidden obsidian]

Thank you!