Any feedback will do, i have heard pretty much all positive feedback so far but if anyone has abolutely anything please let me know 🙂
also quality might be a bit worse cause i had to run it through a compressor :))
#Can somebody give me feedback on my intro?
vast brook
mental apex
Its obvious why youve only heard positive things. Its a great intro that feels like it came from a very expirenced creator. But if i would point out smthn, you should probably explain what a pvp texture pack does/why is it benefital after the intro if you havent already, just in case ppl are new to it.
tribal perch
Yeah, I think this intro does a lot of things well.
- What's the topic?
- Why are we talking about it?
- Why are you the person to know about it?
The speed isn't too bad. You are effectively using sound effects and on screen imagery to keep someone engaged and excited to hear more. The CTA is meaningful and personal.
As Accord said, your first possible point could be, what is a pvp texture pack, and why do they matter? I think your next step if you feel like something needs a touch is to share a full unpublished video, see if your mid point and closure point hit well?