#How do I make my title better/shorter/more clickable?

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atomic holly
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What: How to make the title of my Minecraft YouTube video about 'Surviving Minecraft's Coldest Mod in a Frozen World' shorter/more clickable
Type of Feedback: I'm not sure how to convey the concept of the video better through the title - there are also smart mobs which make plans to kill you, an EnderDragon that's as hard as a dark souls boss, and a temperature mod that kills you if you get too cold
Specifics: Any ideas on how to change my title so that my click through rate will go up pls ? :D

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VHGC9rPfl3M

Surviving Minecraft's Coldest Mod in the Freezing Himalayas...

in which i make the enderdragon as hard as a dark souls boss and try to defeat it.

ft. harold the II

I attempt to survive a completely frozen world, with NO animals for food, SUB-ZERO temperatures, SUPER SMART mobs attracted to sound and light, and all while losing half a heart PE...

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sinful fog
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I think the issue is that the thumbnail isn't really selling the idea of you fighting the enderdragon in an epic battle. I'd entirely retool the thumbnail so that it only focuses on the dragon and your character. If you can frame it in a way that really sells how difficult it would be (IE, making the dragon dominate the majority of the thumbnail while you're guy is really small in the foreground), then it'll tell that story a lot more clearly

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Here's one of my recent thumbnails that's formatted in a similar manner