Hey guys here is my latest video, I would love to get some feedback on my intro and hook, and overall quality of editing.
#Can anyone give me feedback on my hook?
lucid venture
Your visuals and graphics are really professional looking! I thought I was watching a professionally made ad the first few seconds before I realized it was your video.
For me, if you moved the bit where you say, and begin discussing, dopamine (and it shows in between letters) to the very beginning it’d tell me right away what I’m in for. Your hook should be the first 15-45 seconds, right?
neon heath
Your visuals and graphics are really professional looking! I thought I was watch...
Hey thanks a lot for the feedback, you are probably right and on reassessing it, i saw that the intro goes on for 30 seconds. While editing, I thought that the fun fact about 20% of oxygen was the hook, but that whole dopamine sequence was probably the better hook.
Am glad you think the quality was good.
neon heath
My voice is not the best for Youtube imo, but there are options where you can train your own voice and generate tts from there.
civic wind
No like maybe make some slower paced vidoes
With less editing
Like I dunno penguin0 does
neon heath
Can try where the clips are longer. Faceless with less editing is tough, as every 5-6 seconds you need a new clip or transition.