I was looking for some feedback for a draft intro into a video I have been working on for a while. Im just wondering if my voice works for the style of content and if the intro serves its purpose in introducing the viewer and creating a hook. Ive covered a couple more maps since the video and am a bit further into the video but just wondering if there is anything you guys could pick up on before I work more and more on the video. E.g Audio leveling, is it worth adding transitions, vocal techniques etc..
I havnt really done this sort of content and used to do lazy commentary videos which worked but am looking to shift into something where I can be more expressive and add personality. (all priv but used to average 20k views)
Also do if you guys have any tips on ways I can get more impressions after uploading the final thing because I use to rely on trending topics for views but want to find ways for people to watch because of me and not the topic being covered. (end goal)