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For a first video bud, it's pretty darn cool. You should be proud of that.

This feedback is just to help take what you've got, and bring it to the next level :)

I think the main thing you could focus on is the packaging. Right now, you've got a good solid video of you and some mates playing Minecraft.

**The video needs a purpose. **What are you trying to achieve in the game? For example:

Lets Build A Minecraft House!
Surviving 7 Days In Minecraft
My Friend Did What In Minecraft??? (if something really funny happened during the video).

These sorts of topics combined with a suitable thumbnail would peak interest and hopefully gain you some more clicks 🙂

You might also benefit from a hook at the start. Maybe a 10 second segment where you very quickly cover what the viewer is about to watch, e.g, show a few of the best moments accompanied with something like:

"Me and some mates jumped into Minecraft and had the most ridiculous play through ever! If you're not crying with laughter by the end, I will personally eat a creeper. Lets go!".

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Basically, the first 10 seconds is the viewer deciding if they want to watch your video. Give them a reason to stay 🙂

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This is just an example of a possible video thumb/title that should get you some clicks:

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We Found The Best Minecraft Village

#Can you dm and give me some opinions on this video