deft dragon
I've just released a new video on my channel, Toon Fanatic, where I dive into the pilot episode of "The Amazing Digital Circus" from Glitch Productions and Gooseworx.
And I am hoping to get some feedback from everyone, any suggestion is welcome, rip me a new one if you need to 😄
Thanks team, you're the best
open cove
I've just released a new video on my channel, Toon Fanatic, where I dive into th...
Ello alright here's some of my pros and cons
the script itself is good, it's concise, it's to the point, it's nice
but I would want you to tell me something I didn't know or what you're going to break down, immediately at the start of the video
neat dawn
I hate the music choice. I feel like im watching an ad. I like the voiceover tho and you speak fluently.
open cove
otherwise, the first few minutes of it are things i already know from the show itself
open cove
I hate the music choice. I feel like im watching an ad. I like the voiceover tho...
and this.
probably the biggest critique
music should be chosen on mood. Amazing digital circus is a psychological horror
neat dawn
if you change the music choice it would greatly improve the video imo
open cove
but the entire time i feel like a jolly old guy vibing to a commercial song
use the songs provided by glitchworx themselves, or use very mild music/ominous music
that'll help a ton to set up the mood
neat dawn
agreed
deft dragon
What sort of music do you guys think I should use in my videos? Took me a while to find one that didn’t require any attribution or get flagged for copyright infringements 🤣
neat dawn
Digital circus music
open cove
Digital circus music
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or if u want something generic, use bensound
that's what i use, there's a lot of free music there
u just have to give attribution in the description
deft dragon
but I would want you to tell me something I didn't know or what you're going to ...
Sounds good, I’ll look into this for my next review
Thanks guys for the advice, I’ll keep note of it 😁
neat dawn
no problem cant wait to see what you do next!
open cove
Thanks guys for the advice, I’ll keep note of it 😁
no worries all the best for the next one!
Also one small pet peeve
I think you pronounce zooble wrong
deft dragon
Lmao I’ll make sure to pronounce it properly next time when I read my script 😂