Yo!!!! That's severely underrated, your commentary is genuinely funny, and the uncaring and unbothered tone of your voice really adds to that
#feedback on gameplay highlight video [2nd video]
warm musk
I'm gonna nitpick since you want advice, the editing is nice, the voice could use some more energy or confidence, the commentary is pretty funny, but your expressions seem to drown into your voice because it sounds too mellow or unexcited
Again these are nitpicks, I really enjoyed the video, even with such an old game (whose imagery is kinda borderline offensive?) and for someone who does it for a hobby, it was very enjoyable
warm musk
Yess if it's an issue for you to speak loudly, you can always just increase your audio in the editing software, or use a normaliser, it'll do the trick. It was kinda fun watching w retro game so i just watched it in its entirety. Also i loved your dry humour its very fun. Yeah i understand since the game is so old it has some weird representation of people.
warm musk
bro u look the criticism so good u changed into someone else