Don’t hold anything back tell me everything you hate about my new short. That’s the only way I’ll improve I need fresh eyes. If you see anything you like and want to see more of also let me know. Thanks!
#I need critiques on my newest short
misty juniper
vocal maple
stop moving the charecter around i cant focus on what your talking about
spare veldt
i like the way you narrate! the video was a bit chaotic, it was hard to follow what was shown on the screen.
misty juniper
Really? I feel like my narration is pretty bad but thank you that makes me happy! I agree the video is chaotic I’ve been trying different things to see how to retain shorts viewers