#Need Critique on Thumbnail and Title

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stark arrow
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I recently uploaded a desk setup tour. But it hasn't done as well as some of my other ones. Could I get some coaching on if there's any improvement to make on my thumbnail or title?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ERL1A_5yUFg&t=7s&ab_channel=Han

Han

My 2024 ultimate desk setup/home office/productivity workspace/gaming setup is here. I built this setup about 8 months ago and have been slowly upgrading since, so enjoy this tour of my desk setup.

▬▬▬▬▬ LINKS TO EVERYTHING IN MY SETUP BELOW

I'm quite new to cinematography, and I was heavily inspired by @Ludalx own video, so if you haven't...

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midnight coral
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Your photo thumbnail aint a good angle / your screens are off centre and the lighting situation isn’t really appealing. 👀

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Your 2023 thumbnail is way better

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It’s high in contrast so the off centre angle doesn’t matter.

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To have a rather dark surrounding (or some ambiance lighting) provides a cosy vibe.

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I also prefer the colours in the bamboo desktop photo… I love teal beachy colours, but you want to bring more depth to the photo. Better put something on with deeper colours and more contrast as well.

unreal trail
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the word ultimate doesnt really fit it i fell u should just take it off when people use this type of word: ultimate, guarante, secrets etc.. on a yt video doesnt want to make me click like it justsound like you are trynna overhype or some