#intro feedback

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dusty cedar
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This was my first time making a intro for one of my vids can anyone tell me what they think and how I can make it better? Any feedback on the rest of the channels and thumbnails would also be appreciated https://youtu.be/cvbdOwC_YZk?si=UZ1ncSI8Lr0B5ZYG

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arctic horizon
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All i can really reccomend is making the intro a bit quicker, and breifly introduce the game you are playing. (The plot/style of it)

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Otherwise it seems pretty good, just looking at the rest of your channel rn and will be back with more feedback

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So i just looked at your channel page, and here are my thoughts.

Your channel name should be simple, original and easy to remember. Having a group of numbers at the end of your name is really bad for this. Now having numbers replace letters is fine however, good examples of this being moistkritikal. I understand that the reason most people have numbers at the end of their names is because the name was already taken, which is a sign that the name is unoriginal and you should think of something else. When you are thinking of a name, you should search it up on youtube to make sure that it is original. If a lot of high view videos come up, then dont use it. If only a couple of videos with like 2 views or channels with 1 sub, then youve hit the jackpot

lilac flint
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Yeah, I think faster, snappier and more abrupt would keep my attention more and it might also make it funnier.

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I'm gonna be making an intro for Content Warning too so give me feedback when it's out 😛