#Is it ok? what can I do better?

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viscid shale Mar 2, 2024, 11:17 PM

quaint pelican Mar 2, 2024, 11:33 PM

I think it's okay, but the grammer is poor. Like "but did he gave up" should be "but did he give up". It also gives off very auto generated AI content vibes. That's probably what's killing it performance wise.