general feedback and etc is appreciated
#Is this video Clickable?
silent gazelle
deft turret
At the time of typing, I explicitly HAVEN'T clicked on it so I can judge only by the thumbnail and title.
I probably wouldn't click on this because I don't know who you are. I don't really watch storytime stuff in general, and so my interest isn't really piqued.
The thumbnail text is also a bit in theory good, and it synergizes well with your title, but I don't know if it synergizes well with the video yet.
After opening and skimming the video, I notice a few things:
- it is unscripted
Looking at the title and thumbnail I was expecting a more heavily scripted and edited experience with tight pacing. If I had clicked on this video I probably would have clicked off soon after just for that.
- it feels like this video is made for your already existing subscribers.
When I clicked on that video the first thing I saw was the intro, and the second thing I saw was you talking to your community. The third thing was that you mentioned this video would be slightly different from your usual fare. I, as a new viewer, don't know what your usual fare is.
Basically, I think I'm seeing a title/thumbnail mismatch vs. the video. When I see the title/thumbnail combo my first thought is "oh, this will be a scripted video of maybe 15 minutes where someone tells their story and hopefully makes a point." You do tell your story and you do hopefully make a point (I didn't go all the way through) but I see the shorter length and unscripted format and end up losing engagement.
silent gazelle
ill work on it
deft turret
You've got this
waxen ingot
This is decent as far as title/thumb is concerned, but with the background being minecraft, I was expecting like, a minecraft story. Not your actual story
Maybe make the background of your thumb a hospital room and show the vitals or something
But yeah, as Santa said, try to make a fully scripted version and see how it goes.