#Feedback on most recent video

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cerulean gate
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Hi! Can anyone please give me feedback on my most recent video! Looking for feedback of all types.
As for the subtitles- not everthing is subtitled because i thought it wouldnt look great with the background on the subs
https://youtu.be/juL6bw100dc

placid ether
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  1. Subtitles at the start are timed really well
  2. Background music is pretty decent, gives the video a nice feel
  3. The zooms are initially good, but you need to keyframe them so that the camera remains on the thing you're zooming into. If whatever it is is out of frame, then zoom out again
  4. The dings on the "No" are an interesting idea, but I don't think they were timed very well, additionally, it wasn't immediately clear what the dinging was for so make the subtitle bigger to add that clarity
  5. The scoreboard at the end of the first round looks really good but it goes away far too quickly.
  6. The "Censored" subtitle and the Quack censor noise were way out of time
  7. the "By Damaging him further" subtitle was on screen for far too long, and it wasn't clear that this was an editor comment vs something that was said
  8. A good thing to do with subtitles is let them hang for a short period after the words have been said (provided nothing else has been said).
  9. The collision at 3:40 was really cool, but some type of launching sound effect would make it really stand out (if you watch Smii7y he uses a really good one)
  10. At 4:30 the music is too loud
  11. the circle around Adam in the grand finale race would look better if it was tracked on him
  12. Outro felt better this time
cerulean gate
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Thanks for your feedback!! Hopefully when changing editing software (as well as learning from my mistakes) I can make some improvements for the next video