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stone pawn Dec 21, 2023, 6:45 PM

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Hi, I just want your thoughts and what you think of this video :) https://youtu.be/fNpOslW90JI

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Azza Mazza Bazza

Am I a good engineer?

Please watch this video i spent money I don't have on this game.
In this video i will be playing "The enjenir" which is a physics driven sandbox game https://store.steampowered.com/app/1800940/The_Enjenir/

Outro Music: @mysteriousmoose1
Rest of the video: @Azza_Mazza_Bazza

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opal cedar Dec 21, 2023, 8:54 PM

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I'm new to this, great production value but pop filter would minimize the audio peaking.

bronze garnet Dec 22, 2023, 4:23 PM

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you need to clean your audio a lot. I recommend talking from a distance a bit then add a few DB if needed.

stone pawn Dec 22, 2023, 4:52 PM

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yeah i agree im hoping to get a new mic for christmas tho :)

vapid flare Dec 22, 2023, 5:38 PM

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you don't need to put the static between each jumpcut

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the method I use is to put a transition like that if you want to distinguish sections of the video

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i.e. only do it if there isn't any major context you want the viewer to remember from the previous clip

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agreed on the audio, but I think the solution would be to get a pop filter

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the quality of the audio is fine, just put the mic a bit further away and add a pop filter and you'll be fine

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imo the backing music (might be the game music, either way) is a bit too loud, and the music you use for the memes/"attempt 2"-esc transitions is far too loud

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the sound effect you did at "erect" at 3:52 was not good, either include the gif of The Rock and turn the volume down a lot (and find a better quality soundbite) or don't do it

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again with the edit at 4:46, far too loud

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your end screen could do with some work too, it's fairly bland and also low rez?

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video had some decent moments though!

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Keep it up (along with the feedback I gave 😂 )

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