Halloween video Title+Thumnail critique | NewTubers | Page 1

thorny depot Oct 12, 2023, 5:33 PM

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Need some feedback on my friday the 13th title+thumbnail idea. Thanks for your input

"I Made a Script to Annoy My Sister for Halloween"

thorny depot Oct 12, 2023, 5:54 PM

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the other options

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woven cape Oct 12, 2023, 7:32 PM

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The last one seems to be more eye-catching imo, with the high-contrasting pink color.

thorny depot Oct 12, 2023, 7:48 PM

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Nice, that's the one I was planning on using.

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Any way you'd improve it?

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and would you click on the video if you saw it?

woven cape Oct 12, 2023, 7:50 PM

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The text doesn't look like it's from discord (I'm assuming it is?) There's too much space in between the images. It would look better if you re-did the "screenshot" but in discord. Also the title doesn't really catch my attention.

thorny depot Oct 12, 2023, 7:51 PM

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Ah it's a phone not discord

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like sms

woven cape Oct 12, 2023, 7:52 PM

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That's a screenshot from the app itself?

thorny depot Oct 12, 2023, 7:52 PM

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No

woven cape Oct 12, 2023, 7:52 PM

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I think a screenshot works better

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And you can put "My sister" or something catchy as the name instead of "Imouto"

thorny depot Oct 12, 2023, 7:52 PM

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Well Imouto is sister in Romanji

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Since I'm an anime based channel XD

woven cape Oct 12, 2023, 7:53 PM

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Ohh

thorny depot Oct 12, 2023, 7:53 PM

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yeah that's also why it's anime girls

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this is the base image I made for the thumbnail

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thanks for the feedback btw

woven cape Oct 12, 2023, 8:04 PM

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thorny depot

It looks better, ya!

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yw*

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