#Any one who can help me with feedback on my latest vid

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dawn ocean
oak shore
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Hello John, good video. It really is on theme. Here are some things that I think you can do better. At the moment your video is just a slide show of japan with music. That is not going to hold anyones attention. I think your video analytics will show this. Take a look at your audience retention rate.

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However you have something great to work with. Awesome B-roll

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if you can pivot your video to something like "10 must see places in Japan" and use that B-roll to show those places I think it would do much better

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For example, "place number 1, shrines. Shrines are some of the most beautiful places in japan. " then give a reason why on so on.

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Hope this helps John. I look foward to seeing you grown on youtube.