#Does this Thumbnail Work?

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fair salmon
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https://youtu.be/gD6ldxEAdpE?si=H0qgyL-KiydOoyvI
The title is meant to be slightly clickbait-ish, but I wanted to make sure that the title conveys the same message correctly. What do you guys think? Any changes you'd make?

Description:
How does the biggest money-maker in the industry fail at creating compelling and interesting characters? But that begs an even more important question to be asked. If your character is cute and marketable, do you need to?

▶Clips Used (In Order):
Sugoii Japan
Pokémon, the Animated Series
Digimon World Next Order
My Hero Academia
Sta...

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regal thistle
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No, the font choice is bad and there's too much negative space
Make red bigger, center every character, change font color and size and placement to the center front, avoid negative space and you also probably dont need that arrow

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something like this. obviously dont copy the font choice and color, but this is what i mean

fair salmon
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I don't think the placement is the problem here. Because the Failed Character quote is meant to be just for the pokemon, not the trainer, as he's not relevant to the analysis itself. In regards to the font, how is the font choice bad? Is it not readable? Do you mean the color? Just so I understand what's wrong with it

fair salmon