#Need Constructive Criticism on my 2nd video

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grizzled bone
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Need Constructive Criticism on my 2nd video

grizzled bone
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I created a video essay on the Invalid Traffic bug, which is currently plaguing some content creators on YouTube. I'm looking for feedback on all aspects of my video, including editing, music choice, voiceover, thumbnail, and overall content.

I just became a two-month-old editor, so please be honest and critical. I'm eager to learn and grow.
https://youtu.be/b5MXAG_0J4o

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Jahni
Invalid Traffic will lead to the death of YouTube

it's already here...

The Invalid Traffic bug will lead to the death of YouTube.
But what exactly is Invalid Traffic?
The Google AdSense definition is “Invalid traffic includes any clicks or impressions that may artificially inflate an advertiser's costs or a publisher's earnings.”

It would make sense for YouTube to want to stop this from happe...

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woven night
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okay so this is super high quality and i ended up watching the entire thing. though there is a small chance that's because i have seen people in the partner discord complain about the bug so i had some interest.

the editing is perfect imo and i cant see a single flaw, maybe somebody with more experience in that kind of editing could.

The narration is super high quality but it has one major downfall for me. your delivery is slow and robotic, in the absolute nicest way possible, when you talk like that all i can think about is FLUDD from super mario sunshine. i think its the spacing between words.

what your actually saying though is perfect its just the delivery that does not sit right with me