I need to change my title/thumbnail but I'm not sure what to change

[ruby sandal]

I posted my second video today, and already after a few hours I have just as many impressions as my last video, which has about 200 views; however, this one has 9.

I'm not sure if its the movie choice (I am doing movie reviews) if the thumbnail needs to be changed or if I need to do something with the title. My video is a lot better than my last one, but I'm curious to see what my CTR would be if the right audience actually clicked on it VS my last video that had people leaving after a minute.

Should I keep it as is and just wait or change?

https://youtu.be/qRNauMUtbiA

Also I'm starting to think its probably the title... but the title of the movie is long so I don't know what I should do with it

really happy with the amount of impressions being from suggested videos but I obviously fell flat on making it enticing to click.

[astral viper]

Not an expert but the title seems too long and the text on the thumbnail could be bigger

although i like the general hook of the title

[ruby sandal]

@astral viper Yes, I'm thinking the same thing but Im CONFLICTED because I feel like the only reason I'm getting search impressions is becuase the movie title is in the title

Thumbnail text, yes 0/10 needs to be bigger. brb doing that now

[astral viper]

what if you put the name of the movie at the end? its cutting off halfway through the title

[ruby sandal]

I thought the hook was killer! ughhhhh the damn "..."

Yea maybe I could do that

anything to change this impression to viewer conversion

What about, "Megan Fox Deserved Better │ Confessions of a Teenage Drama Queen"

[astral viper]

that would work, but personally i find your original concept of title more inticing

[ruby sandal]

same 😦

ugh, Im going to run it through chat GPT or something

at least I know my tags are working

[astral viper]

yeah thats always a good sign

if its any consolation i would click on your vid if it got recommended to me as long as the text in the thumbnail was bigger and i dont even know what that movie is

[ruby sandal]

I didn't realize how small it looked until now, rookie move lol

yea, thats another thing too. Its a movie from almost 20 years ago. Mainly relying on people clicking on it in my target age who are nostalgic for it

[astral viper]

id still stand behind just putting the title of the movie at the end and maybe taking out some unnecessary words but thats just me

then even if people dont know what it is, they'll want to find out and why it failed

[ruby sandal]

The Failure of "Confessions of a Teenage Drama Queen"

Thank you @astral viper 🙂 🙂

[astral viper]

that sounds better imo i hope it turns around for you

[odd vapor]

Your mic is too big in your thumbnail, it's covering so much of you. take a seperate photo for your thumbnail instead of a video grab.