#Thumbnail feedback

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mellow nova
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I need help making a thumbnail. This is what I got so far. Can you guys critique it for me?

tranquil urchin
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The red text is pretty hard to read, you're definitely gonna want a border around it. I would also scale up the head in the corner and try the hide the fact that the image is only from the neck up. Honestly I'd put a small border around that as well.

I don't known how much it matters, but it should be "YOU NEED TO KNOW" not "YOU NEED TOO KNOW", but that might be me being strict about diction.

There might even been too much text, it's quite a lot to read.

violet quest
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I think it’s too much text. What’s the title

tranquil urchin
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Either You Need to Know or the 7 tips part should be in the title for sure

mellow nova
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7 tip to help survivers escape - The Texas chainsaw massacre game.

tranquil urchin
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probably leave you need to know in the thumbnail

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It's more eye catching

violet quest
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Yeah I wouldn’t repeat what’s in the title on the thumbnail. So I would remove that text

mellow nova
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So what about something like this.

These tips will improve your victim gameplay - Texas chainsaw massacre game

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Or maybe replace the bottom text in the thumbnail with victims guide?

violet quest
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I like that better. Is this a game like dead by daylight with victims and a hunter or am I off base?

mellow nova
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Yeah there are victims and the family members. Family are the killers

violet quest
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Okay. I could see the you need to know and victim guide on the thumbnail while the title is 7 tips working out

violet quest
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First one