#I spent 100 hours making my last video for 5 views, I need an advice

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tranquil spindle
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Hi everyone, I'd like to hear some advice about how to get more views in my youtube cannel.

I spent 100 hours making my last video (editing, script, recording and posting) but just it got 5 views..

I need an advice to improve with my content.

I'm all ears

here my video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4sZ9D66HCP0&t=3s

Hello guys, my birthday was 5 months ago. My girlfriend promised me to buy me the new Valorant Champions Pack 2023. 5 months later I finally got my birthday present from her.
In todays video I'm going to show you her reaction and a little valorant montage highlights with the New Valorant Champions Pack 2023.
see u in a couple days

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near python
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The editing is solid, but overall there's just no story or compelling reason to watch this video.

It's called "My girlfriend buys me Valorant Skins", and I thought I was about to watch a video about a girl who has no idea about valorant trying to pick out the best skins or something, and it'd be funny.

Instead, you had a specific skin you wanted, told your gf to buy it, and that was the end of that storyline. So your whole video idea according to your title is accomplished in the first minute of the video.

The rest of the video is just you playing some games, and narrating them. Albeit with good editing. But good editing is nothing on its own.

Also at 1:34 and maybe other places, your text on screen is wrong. It says "these kids" instead of presumably "the skins". But this is a minor problem compared to the bigger issue of this video having no point.

You have a video called "Valorant but I CAN’T LEAVE UNTIL I WIN". That's a specific challenge. That's a video with some kind of reason to watch it. That challenge itself may not be that interesting to many people, but it's something.

This current video doesn't have that.

Your editing is good. Your energy is good. If you want to get views, come up with better ideas to apply your skills to. Maybe something like "Getting a 50 kill streak in valorant" or whatever (I don't know that much about this game but you get the point).

tranquil spindle
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Thank you so much for your feedback
I never thought abour the principal idea in my videos it's a goo advice I'll improve it
You gave me some ideas!
I'll improve all I can thanks for your time

hallow locust
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As Mr. Beast says, it's 80% idea 20% work, relatively.

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BTW, your content is not as horrible as his comment made it sound like. It's just that it is not appealing to a lot of audience even in the Fortnite niche (Maybe if you had a lot of subscribers it may make sense to them).

You did a good job over all!

tranquil spindle
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ty so much any way I love to read any comment to improve my content. Ty for your time