Can be made better? How can I improve?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nNyvO_Pwxjo
#Can I please get feedback on my video?
vestal birch
silk sable
You can easily understand my whole feedback: "Low Effort"
You just picked a random fitting video, gave it a music track, read the r/nosleep post and called it a day.
If you really want to make a good content with this theme, you better learn animation and story writing. There's a channel called Llama arts. which does it best. Study that channel.