#Can I please get feedback on my video?

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vestal birch
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Can be made better? How can I improve?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nNyvO_Pwxjo

No Sleep Story by "Beardify" on r/nosleep
Music by soundsmehul4215.editorx.io/mehulsharmamusic

Short Horror Stories narrated by "No Sleep This Week"
NoSleep is a genre of horror that has found it's home on Reddit. Creepypasta would be another name. No one knows if the stories are real or fake... It's up to you to decide.
#horrorstories #nosle...

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silk sable
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You can easily understand my whole feedback: "Low Effort"

You just picked a random fitting video, gave it a music track, read the r/nosleep post and called it a day.

If you really want to make a good content with this theme, you better learn animation and story writing. There's a channel called Llama arts. which does it best. Study that channel.