opal merlin
I really like the video
#Can I get feedback on my boyfriend's video?
dusk jolt
I don't know why I kept watching but I did. . .
No way I love the thumbnail tbh.
Mabie if possible do cuts once in a while or have him walking and talking . Mabie pair it with a coffee or beverage.
Solid start though. I I'm curious to see where this goes
Something about the thumbnail though
sick scroll
Video seems decent. Thumbanil and title don't seem very clickbait so would change them. "The Best Donuts In Columbus, GA" or something would be more in the right direction.
I suspect that removing the long intro sequence would increase retention, but you'll have to look at your retention curve to confirm that