plucky rivet
Hi all, I got some great feedback about needing to make my intro a bit more sophisticated which I've tried to take into account but I worry I'm rambling at this point. Would love any thoughts on the video, particularly points I can incorporate into future videos.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1j5JoNDRkRm2Y9qz4WbiSOFqWeYBgz-Nr/view
nova jewel
I think it could be a bit shorter. Personally I think you're good like 40 seconds in but I think you're engaging enough that having it be a minute isn't too bad.
austere isle
You definitely sold me the game during your intro. I didn't feel it was too long, it was really funny to watch. I would remove the like and subscribe call, it is over rated, I would suggest to add a visual cta while you play the game, it is more subtle and I believe more engaging.