I spent 2 and a half months on this video, tell me if it's good!

[lusty steppe]

This video took way too long because of shipment delays and other nonsense. I hope you find it somewhat entertaining, and tell me what I can improve upon in the future! https://youtu.be/BWh4zKcP5xw

[proper fractal]

I only watched the first minute of this so far, but here are some thoughts:
-the intro is too long. If I click in a video about cameras, why make me sit through 30 seconds of a record player? That intro should be edited down to two seconds long. You don’t need to spend that long showing you opening the record player and starting it.
-when you’re showing the pile of cameras, you say obvious things that don’t need to be said like how we’ve all seen cameras. Cut that.
-when you’re talking about the prices of cameras you don’t know the price of and you say you didn’t look it up, it’s like “why bring it up if you don’t know?” You could easily look it up and start the shot over.

That’s all I watched tho, at least for now.

I will say I am intrigued by the premise because all of those are really low end price points for cameras, and ultra-low-end cameras are under-discussed.

[proper fractal]

I skimmed around to see what the rest of the video was like and I found a part 15 minutes in where you say you're going to edit something out and then there's just a long-feeling silent pause. You don't need me to tell you that you did not edit this enough. You know it-- there's proof in the video. Do more editing! Focus on the information you're delivering and get rid of the irrelevant stuff and pauses