I need some feedback on my editing and thumbnail, if you spot more tell me pls???

[modern lotus]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J1g0XAV1OyE

[quiet hemlock]

That mic audio....... How should I put this...... Ykwim?

[quartz osprey]

Tbh idk what I watched (but that's just me).
I think you have unique freestyle, at first I thought you need a better/clearer mic, but I think your video style can be a part that makes you different from xxx other youtubers that do the similiar thing. Your videos are def not for me, but I think younger population will like it. It's little unusual but I think it can get popular. Goodluck!

[vapid pine]

Watching on my phone, I really didn’t notice any audio issues and you definitely have a unique editing style. There’s a clear timeline to the video, I really like the pacing and organization.

[modern lotus]

Thank YOU SO MUCH :]

[modern lotus]

Thank you for telling me you have any mic brand recommendations

[modern lotus]

I really appreciate your critique it’s so detailed THANK YOUUU

[quiet hemlock]

Your mic is fine. . . Your screaming into it from 2 inches away, Don't do that.

Look up information on how to use a mic.

And if your still having issues. Look up information on how to use software filters if you have them in your recording software.

Then you can look up how to fix audio in post production too.

3 ways to improve audio.

1. Use the equipment properly.
2. Input filters or behavior modification via recording software
3. Same as 2 but in editing software. Wich it sounds like you are at least a bit familiar with.

Just use it properly though

[modern lotus]

Okkkk got it THANK YOUUUU

[modern lotus]

After adding some filters on the editing software it actually is way more better. THANK YOU SO MUCH I am gonna look into the editing software filters but ur help has made a BIG change : D

[quiet hemlock]

Super