fleet owl
It's a video about Trash In Space. I'm looking for a feedback regarding overall quality of the video, is this a quality somewhat that you'll watch if you come across?
Is there anything odd that you noticed? Lastly, what did you particularly liked about the video?
scenic kiln
it made me click off and go watch the Wall-E launch scene
great scene
but maybe not great that i clicked off within the first 30 seconds because I found it a little bland
fleet owl
but maybe not great that i clicked off within the first 30 seconds because I fou...
Not your topic of interest or just not pacy and entertaining enough?
scenic kiln
Not your topic of interest or just not pacy and entertaining enough?
Okay so I went through and fully watched it and have some thoughts
fleet owl
Okay so I went through and fully watched it and have some thoughts
On 2X?
scenic kiln
Yeah, I tend to watch feedback stuff at double the speed
First, Astronomy is probably one of if not my all time favorite interests, which might be a strong bias against your channel in some ways, as I mostly have already seen videos about all of this stuff but from the perspective of a someone who only has a passing interest in astronomy it could be good
It's not nearly as terrible as most astronomy or science videos out there, there's a vast sea of extremely misleading clickbait garbage with nothing but stock footage while a narrator reads a painful bland script
so the bar is fairly low
main things I am not really a fan of is the visuals though, they look very generic and corporate, but Im guessing you dont exaxtly have the time or resources to invest hundreds or thousands of dollars into personally made art
fleet owl
main things I am not really a fan of is the visuals though, they look very gener...
Yea. I plan to improve that a lot, but right now don't have enough resources
scenic kiln
your voice is far from the youtube standard, but it took me a really long time and I still dont feel like I have fully reached that point, but you put some amount of care into your script or delivery so that's a plus, youtube voice is more of just an experience thing so you need to grind out videos and continue to improve on each one
you could do way more with the music, audio is usually considered the most important aspect of a video and while royalty free music can work perfectly fine, consider using multiple tracks to make the viewer feel different things at certain points, you dont need to do anything crazy, but for an 8 minute long video you could have 2-3 music tracks and really add a lot more variety for not a ton of effort
In terms of accuracy as far as I know it doesn't have any egregious oversimplifications or misleading statements, only one that may be a bit misleading is that Sputnik 1 became space junk, because while it technically did for a few months, it burned up in the atmosphere soon after, and with your introduction hook with wall-e, it may make some people think Sputnik is still in space. But that's as FAR as I can stretch the critique and it's really not that big of a deal
The title, thumbnails, all seem pretty good as well, maybe consider changing "space debris problem" to "Kessler syndrome" IF the video is doing poorly, but from what I can tell, 400 views in the first day is pretty decent for your channel, so maybe just let it sit the way it is for a few weeks and see how it does