worthy pilot
Not my first video but like maybe my 13th so still super new whatever input you feel
What:
Game Video of Skyrim. Cuts to my feedback of in-game situations emphasizing rapid fire absurdity.
Type of Feedback:
I would like to know how my style hits on first impression.
Is the "STYLE" different enough from other gameing videos
How well am I doing to make thumbnails look
Readable and clear.
How was my presentation.
How was my outro?
light glade
I have diagnosed ADHD.
This is not how ADHD works. I would drop that ASAP. Yes, not every form of ADHD is the same, but people with ADHD arent always crazy or brain go brrr everywhere haha quirky type. I wont go further explaining it, but it could be offensive to other people. It basically means that we cannot focus, have trouble processing information quickly, as well as many other unfortunate side effects.
Those, like myself, who have been medically diagnosed with ADHD, when it comes to consuming media, will consume media normally like any other person, they just might be playing a game at the same time as well, or doing something else. One type of media "made for those with ADHD" Isnt really a thing. I tend to like longer, slower, more informative, investigative, or documentry-style videos, or long playthroughs from some of my favorite streamers. I consume all types of media just like any normal person, i just might also be playing a game at the same time.
As far as the style:
The style is fine for a funny moments type of video, but the voice is a bit slightly monotone, even for sardonic (like penginz0) and the jokes feels very forced to "create" funny moments. Just have fun and if something funny happens, add it to the video, and of course you can add all the jokes you want :)
The ending of the video is a bit abrupt, but as its a funny moments type video, it makes sense.
The actual outro itself... as a graphic designer, i have no idea what I'm looking at 👁️👄👁️
worthy pilot
Perfect. That's the reaction I was going for.
worthy pilot
I have diagnosed ADHD.
This is not how ADHD works. I would drop that ASAP. Yes,...
When you say the jokes sound forced can you give specific examples.
And do you mean what I have been saying. Or the pictures being posted on screen.
I will take down the ADHD comment. I wasent using it as a clinical diagnosis. I should find another way to say it next time.
worthy pilot
Perhaps an absurdist approach to learning is ok.
gleaming torrent
Here’s some thoughts on the video!
The type of style you have actually is nice, it’s quick, short punches and follows a long form story still but honestly get more “short-form” vibe from it.
Throughout the video it cuts very quickly to whatever you say next with no breathe hold or dead air. Which cuts the attention span and resets it.
Now here’s where I think you might lose people.
The type of jokes you make are good but the images you show might not relate to some people.
You mentioned “what is this trash?” And showed a rapper, which may implies rap is trash
It’s such a vague thing but if someone who likes rap sees that might not enjoy the video anymore. (It’s not a bad joke, I actually liked it and I like rap so lol)
Add music, but not just one song
Add music that will evolve with how you feel about the situation. with your fast pace style, quick punch lines jokes and onto the next subject you move QUICK. Which mood music would help the audience feel what you feel but carry them in and out of each moment through the video.
Keep your style throughout the whole video. You had images and etc throughout the first half of the video but then it just stopped! Bring that back, that’s funny and adds the personality!
Lastly, your video would be 10x funnier with the right SFX added in! get a bit crazy with it, find cartoon or meme sound bits!
What you’re showing right now is an amazing foundation to work from, now just refine it and keep the style flowing through out it all!
worthy pilot
Ah crap. I ment the trash they are wearing as "jewelry" .... They just happen to be rappers.
I never thought of music. My main concern is I don't know anything about where or how to get it without getting nailed with some copywrite stuff. I have barely begun to scratch the surface in regards to audio