Hey guys I uploaded a new video today and I would like some criticism on it, because I’m somewhat new to a first impression type video and want to know some things I could improve. I don’t know if I’m supposed to send the link in the post so I’ll do it in a comment:)
#Looking for criticism on this new style of video I’m trying out
vivid yacht
I actually think this is quite good, in my personal opinion. You made some great points that really showed off the game's specific strengths, your speech is coherent, informative and lighthearted and you give an overview of some of the features the beta already has.
Also some nice nuance in your remark of the beta still being just a beta, that shows some quality as a youtuber in my opinion. Not just pretending that the game is a masterpiece, the new Fortnite, the new Apex legends, no. It's just a fun game right now, an enjoyable experience.
If I have to give points of critique, maybe talk a bit more about how the shooting and combat feels in a FPS game. You talk about the guns and the revolver packing a punch for example, but I think that this topic could be discussed a bit more in depth. Also replace the first 50 seconds of footage with gameplay or something more enticing. The first minute of the video being a class selection screen is not that interesting. Finally, but I'm just nit-picking based on personal preference here, your thumbnail could be better I think. Considering you just show a random still from the gameplay, make the title stand out more. Make the text covering the entire screen. OR use another image, something more like this and include the text in the bottom left. Just some quick remarks, but keep up the good work!
opaque plover
I actually think this is quite good, in my personal opinion. You made some great...
thank you, I appreciate all the feedback, I agree with you I should have gone a little more in depth with the guns and when I was editing idk why I thought that would be a good choice to have the menu screen lol but all good points that I will take into consideration thank you for taking the time to watch and giving me some feedback:)