Intro Critique

[prime thistle]

https://streamable.com/3seinf
I'm working on a video rn, and I don't know if this is the right way I should start my video
It's not 100% done, I still need to add some graphics and stuff. But does it feel good
For context the video is titled "Zelda, but Link is Too Fast"
Where I put a mod that turns mine and every mobs walking/running speed 5x
I'll introduce the stakes a little later in the video, but if you need to know, its that I need to run a 1/4 mile for every time I die, you know "to live my dream"

I also don't really know how to transition to the content

[ruby tartan]

When you say “there’s only one problem” have it cut to black, cut the music, give it a pause then say straight up “I’m FAT” with an echo reverb effect and wear the most unflattering shirt ever to show yourself looking more fat

Instant comedy