#Can I get some thumbnail feedback?:)

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cloud sentinel
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My title will be: "Is The Walking Dead's Ending Perfect?" or something along those lines. This is the fourth video in a series I'm doing. The first one did pretty well with 7k views. But I really want to make this one special. It's about the fourth season of the walking dead. I want to convey how it's a commentary video, not gaming, and how good and intriguing the game is. Aswell, as set up questions for a story throughout the video. I hope that makes sense. Anyway if anyone could give me some feedback that'd be great. I feel like something is missing. Feedback on my title, thumbnail, etc. is welcome!

pure valley
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I would make the title: "So perfect I cried"

I would remove the writing as it seems out of place. Perhaps have a border frame around the picture and it will make everything pop out better.