#Would love some feedback on my newest video!

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tawdry finch
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_Axd-cVNTgY&t=216s
I would love some feedback on what i can do better with my content. Do you guys have any ideas, I believes most of my viewers don't watch a lot of the video and I want to know if you guys have suggestion to make the video more enjoyable from start to finish.

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pliant pivot
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The only feedback I can give is that It feels pretty drawn out. (the intro itself being a full minute long before you even show the game.) other than that the editing is hilarious and I love the content. Keep it up and feel motivated ๐Ÿ˜„

tawdry finch
strong slate
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Cut everything before 00:30.
As a new or unknown viewer coming across your channel there is no incentive for a random to like & subscribe without first providing value to the viewer (which is why creators ask closer to the end of the video).
Transitions are nice, cuts are nice, just add some camera movement so we're not watching a talking head for longer then 3 seconds at a time.
Cut the segments between you saying lets go and lets begin.
Most importantly, remember that each cut should progress the story. If a cut/edit doesn't add value to the narrative you're telling to your audience, it wasn't worth the edit change.

Hope this helps and best of luck! (Great to see another horror content creator here)

tawdry finch
strong slate
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Just mixing up the experience for the viewer.