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lost sentinel Jan 13, 2023, 9:55 PM

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design is perfect for short just a bit of a skippable short

harsh prawn Jan 13, 2023, 10:35 PM

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The music doesn’t really fit the theme

visual sky Jan 13, 2023, 11:42 PM

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I agree with Kenton, not sure why you are fishing as a casual viewer

grizzled wyvern Jan 14, 2023, 6:25 AM

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I think the idea is fine, but I think having your face in the video doesn't add anything to the short, I understand the intent but I think using the in game character or just giving that space back to the game is better

#Feedback on 2 newest shorts!