#I think I've made the best video of my life (so far)... can I please get some feedback?

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forest lodge
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JC2wjmYOdBs

This video is the most well produced video on the channel so far, but I know there is a lot to be improved so if you guys could be so amazing as to help me out with some feedback

Looking on comments on anything, including thumbnail / description, but really looking at the main content.

YouTube
The Greasetronauts
Who is the best drunk Krunker player? - PAJAFN

Sit back, relax, and chill with Peter and Julian as we have a few drinks, play a few games, and talk about whatever we want.

Today, we played Krunker and shot each other in the face, a true work of art
Hope you enjoy

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knotty carbon
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  1. Boost your dialogue volume to be much louder than then game + SFX
  2. Watch for peaking (laughing) volume levels
  3. Drop the intro and get right into the video
  4. Cut the video down to highlights + best moments (there's a lot of sections with no dialogue and it feels like filler)
  5. Who's the audience for this video? Will random X person scrolling their feed care who you are and who's better? (It's not to be rude it's more so, will random people care who nobody to them is beats another nobody) It could change to be more of a "I DESTROYED This Player In Krunker" type of title/video to generate interest + intrigue to click.
mortal willow
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Agree with everything that AuronSpectre is saying.
Another thing would be if your gonna have text on the screen make sure its very easy to read.
If your gonna switch perspectives make sure its obvious besides just having a name. Possibly a bright border around the second persons POV or something

atomic summit
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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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Mainly agree with Aurorn, make the mix a lot more friendly to the voiceover

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Also make sure there is no peaking because the audio peaks a bit