#Feedback on first YouTube video

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wild cliff
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Hey guys! I'm new to all this, but I tried my hand at making a YouTube video, if you have any feedback or know any way I can get better at reading off a script (because it sounds terrible), please let me know! Also if you know any good laptop video editors please let me.know as I am currently using my mobile phone, thank you!
https://youtu.be/dC1gwT_jCG0

Watch this to learn how Biaheza, the famous finance-entertainment YouTuber REALLY made his money, we expose the truth.

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wicked crest
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Really good thumbnail and title. The music In the video is too loud, your voice sounds monotone and sounds like you’re reading a book you really don’t want to read. It doesn’t sound very important, and when I feel like you think it’s not important, I don’t think it’s important. Aka you don’t sound very enthusiastic about the subject. And I understand this is completely normal for the first video and I had the same issue on my first video. Another issue I see is that your content is very repeated and I’ve been seeing these “how this YouTuber got famous or how they succeeded” videos and there’s no personality to it or anything that would make me decide to watch you compared to anyone else doing the same content. I wish you best of luck! And the software I use to edit my videos is Adobe premiere pro

wild cliff
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Thanks a lot! I definately need to work on my voice and speech haha, and I get what you mean by the video not being that unique, I'm trying to work on ideas relating to the finance space but any ideas you have would also be loved, thank you for your feedback, I really appreciate it and will definately work on it!

lyric skiff
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agree with the above

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the title is great, thumbnail is pretty good

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but the video kinda lacks that substance of intrigue and is more held to facts like his background

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also voice is a bit monotone and the audio quality could be better

wild cliff
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Thanks for the feedback! I'll try to make it more engaging in the next one's!