Feedback on newest video of The Forest

[undone jungle]

The intro is way too big of an ask for new viewers. I get what you're doing and it'd be ok if you already had a big audience who knew good content was coming, but new viewers aren't guaranteed that, so they're not going to give you too much of their time. You really gotta peak a new viewer's interest asap.

"This is the story of 3 fembo...men, who got lost in the forest"<-voice narrated w/text
cut
"What a great nap...who's kid is this?" should be the first 10 secs of the vid. We have the setup and two jokes in just a few secs.

Then cut to the boys joke.

I think you're funny, but the pacing is way too slow at the start. i skimmed tho the vid and the other issue was the audio loudness. you can try a compressor, but it spikes and is unpleasant and jarring at times when I don't think you mean it to be.