#What can I do to improve this thumbnail?

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simple sandal
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I think it looks pretty good for what it is, but I'd like to know what you guys think I could do to improve it!

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i was trying to recreate the "Scott The Woz feel"

rotund yarrow
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I would possibly use a different font but my personal preference is for really basic fonts so I'm a little biased. I think adding a slightly thicker black outline to the text+ a white outline to the person would probably make it look a little better but it already looks pretty good

verbal moon
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Sans fonts are designed to be easy to read, personally I always stick with some sort of sans font.
Another thing that I think might make it really effective is to replace your head and face with a "power" character from Nintendo. If I see someone who I have no idea who they are, I'm way less likely to click that than I am Mario

simple sandal
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i was going for trying to replicate his thumbnail style for this video

verbal moon
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I'm not your audience so I dunno what your power people are, but I'd expect a video about Nintendo games to hone in on a popular character

simple sandal
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ahh i get what you mean. thank you!

rain panther
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I’d like to start by saying it’s a VERY good start, you’re showing some really good understanding of laying out your thumbnail well!

What I would say would make it look better is just adding to what you’ve got, make the background slightly blurrier, make the text a little more legible, drop shadow the d’s games in the back, maybe ad a few more to fill up the empty spaces like at your left side

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I’d love to get on a call and point it out a little easier