Wip - Elden Ring Inspired Short Film (Feedback appreciated!)

[gray wigeon]

Been working on an Elden Ring inspired short film for the last few weeks for my final university project. Here's a whole heap of progress screenshots

Lighting and weather tests. Settled on night foggy for that blue hour vibe

Got majorly side tracked at one point and made this dude

Covered him in moss decals and mushroom. I'm using Dash for procedural scattering to streamline the process of environment creation.

✨ Lighting, fireflies, and color grading 🌟

Finally began working on interior last night

Proceeded to get majorly side tracked today trying to create this

[gray wigeon]

Feedback is always appreciated. Composition and lighting are some week points of mine so would love to improve

[gray wigeon]

Wip - Elden Ring Inspired Short Film (Feedback appreciated!)

[leaden talon]

Looks great

specially the skeleton

[tiny tundra]

The focal point you want the audience to look at feels a bit scattered with the bright fireflies and golden seed tree - maybe try something with DOF?

[gray wigeon]

I see what you mean yeah, I'll try playing with the depth of field and maybe tone down the fireflies and distracting lighting